Found this on the web.

[countrygirl3838]

I found this on the net. What do you think of it?

The Party Girl:

A rain slick highway and a car too fast,
She didn’t make the curve, now life is past.

The life of the party, that she could be;
but now she is dead, plain for all to see.

That gorgeous body, once given such acclaim,
now lies cold; we remember not her a name.

While in this world, she had only thoughts of pleasure and wine;
now life is over and at death’s table she must dine.

No thoughts given to love of God,
but from lustful men, always seeking an approving nod.

That shameless bust, which gathered so much lust,
now decays and returns to dust.

Where perfume and lace once graced her skin,
now only worms & maggots gnaw, let their feast begin.

The carcass rots with a stench so foul;
O daughter of sin, where art thou now?

In the dungeons of Hell, oh sinner depraved,
for all eternity thou shall curse and rave.

The demons and the dammed, are now her lot;
the just reward that her sins have bought.

Lest we loose hope, we should remember that God's mercy is far greater than our sins. His capacity to forgive is far greater than our capacity to offend. If you ever really need help, please pray to Him and ask for help. More souls go to Hell for sins of the flesh, than for any other reason. God is waiting to forgive all our sins. All we must do is repent & ask for his forgiveness.

 

[STDiva]

What do I think?

A bad poem written by some 17 year old goth girl.

 

[gunslingingbird]

 

[rawlwear]

It's alright, just goes to show what you have now means nothing when your dead.

 

[tiger1977]

It makes me want to take my crown and go sit on my throne in Hell.

 

[Jeep!]

I'm pretty sure the big guy cares more about being a good person, rather than a religious person. I mean, if there's a God and a Heaven, I'm gonna go ahead and say Ghandi's in there, and he never once asked God's forgiveness on anything.

 

[gunslingingbird]

It makes me want to take my crown and go sit on my throne in Hell.

Nice of you to keep it warm for me. :hatsoff:

 

[tiger1977]

Nice of you to keep it warm for me. :hatsoff:

I feel that I must tell you now: I am planning a coup. It will happen on the 6th day of the 6th year of the 6th millenium. But enjoy your reign until then.

 

[gunslingingbird]

I feel that I must tell you now: I am planning a coup. It will happen on the 6th day of the 6th year of the 6th millenium. But enjoy your reign until then.

That's still 4,000 years away. I'm sure the novelty of being Supreme Ruler of Hell will have worn off by then and I'll have moved on to bigger and better things. Maybe I'll have taken up ballroom dancing and golf by then.

 

[BlueBalls]

C'mon now CountryGirl let's be honest, you wrote the poem?

The conversion hasnt worked I'm afraid, better luck next time. I'm sure there are plenty Scientologist forums out there. So, you know, there's still hope....

You have previous, this was your second post:

A rain slick highway and a car too fast,
She didn’t make the curve, now life is past.

The life of the party, that she could be;
but now she is dead, plain for all to see.

That gorgeous body, once given such acclaim,
now lies cold; we remember not her a name.

While in this world, she had only thoughts of pleasure and wine;
now life is over and at death’s table she must dine.

No thoughts given to love of God,
but from lustful men, always seeking an approving nod.

That shameless bust, which gathered so much lust,
now decays and returns to dust.

Where perfume and lace once graced her skin,
now only worms & maggots gnaw, let their feast begin.

The carcass rots with a stench so foul;
O daughter of sin, where art thou now?

In the dungeons of Hell, oh sinner depraved,
for all eternity thou shall curse and rave.

The demons and the dammed, are now her lot;
the just reward that her sins have bought.

So remember these words O sinners, and I bid thee ponder them well,
lest, for all eternity, thy soul should rot---- in Hell.

http://board.freeones.com/showthread.php?t=286054 Exactly the same lame poem :dunno:

Something aint good in the hood I suspect...

And just for kicks let's go back to post #1
http://board.freeones.com/showpost.php?p=3047728&postcount=19

Are religious trolls the worst kind? Or the ones that only have shit on their minds?

Maybe they're the same person?

 

[Ainttalkinlove]

Its horrible. It has absolutely no rythem. The word choice is horribly basic and like STDiva said, it sounds like "A bad poem written by some 17 year old goth girl"

 

[alexpnz]

Written by an "Emo" chick while watching "A Nightmare Before Christmas" stoned after just watching Gossip Girl and wishing death on the pretty girls while wearing a purple and black sweater w/ skinny jeans all while combing your jet black hair with purple ends! :rofl:

 

[The Paulinator]

A pretty young girl from Oakland hills
Stole her dad's car and all her mom's pills
Got all fucked up
drove off a cliff
ended up dead
dead in a ditch
just like her mother always told her she'd end up
all fucked up
Dead
dead in a ditch


D.R.I. from "Four of a Kind"

 

[jobrien]

I think it was written by a confused Christian who has not been reading everything in their Book. This was the same kind of person in the poem that Jesus would have loved and forgiven.

 

[24788]

If you wrote it, it's fine. You don't need to lie about it.

What's lame is you have made two posts about it and you won't admit it's yours (if it is, which I suspect since you made two posts about it).

 

[Alyssa Rose]

I think that its someone trying to preach.

& its basically saying that anybody who is a) pretty and b) comfortable with their body is a major sinner and will burn in a hell.

 

[busenbust]

:wtf:

 

[Sicario]

I found this on the net. What do you think of it?

The Party Girl:

A rain slick highway and a car too fast,
She didn’t make the curve, now life is past.

The life of the party, that she could be;
but now she is dead, plain for all to see.

That gorgeous body, once given such acclaim,
now lies cold; we remember not her a name.

While in this world, she had only thoughts of pleasure and wine;
now life is over and at death’s table she must dine.

No thoughts given to love of God,
but from lustful men, always seeking an approving nod.

That shameless bust, which gathered so much lust,
now decays and returns to dust.

Where perfume and lace once graced her skin,
now only worms & maggots gnaw, let their feast begin.

The carcass rots with a stench so foul;
O daughter of sin, where art thou now?

In the dungeons of Hell, oh sinner depraved,
for all eternity thou shall curse and rave.

The demons and the dammed, are now her lot;
the just reward that her sins have bought.

Lest we loose hope, we should remember that God's mercy is far greater than our sins. His capacity to forgive is far greater than our capacity to offend. If you ever really need help, please pray to Him and ask for help. More souls go to Hell for sins of the flesh, than for any other reason. God is waiting to forgive all our sins. All we must do is repent & ask for his forgiveness.

This emo bullshit sucks major Donkey dick.