Wainkerr99
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Oh. Oki. STIP means Statewide Transportation Improvement program. er..
Went to stip club/feel like crap......(long read)
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I hear ya. I've been in such a hurry I had to tell a crazy story without pressing the enter key before I had to go to work.
i need five Nurofens after reading that!
The Paulinator
Spreading the seed
That is where STIP is located, plus I thought they taught things like paragraphs and punctuation there. Unlike here in the southeast, where they teach us to shut up and look pretty. :dunno:
scallywag!
Ok first, this is a porn forum - not English 101. Second, most of you have probably never been in this situation. I think I would have done the same thing. How hot is it your wife is fucking herself next to her drunk friend? I think I would have tried her out as well just to see where it leads.
Re: Went to strip club/feel like crap......(long read)
geez thanks!! like i posted on the title, I FEEL LIKE CRAP. i know what i did was wrong, not because she's my wife's friend but because she's MY friends wife. and most of u have not replied to the part where i said im pretty sure she knew what was going on. my wife drank the same amount and was not even close to being past out.
im not looking to have a threesome with her, but it would be fun to have her watch or something like that.
geez thanks!! like i posted on the title, I FEEL LIKE CRAP. i know what i did was wrong, not because she's my wife's friend but because she's MY friends wife. and most of u have not replied to the part where i said im pretty sure she knew what was going on. my wife drank the same amount and was not even close to being past out.
im not looking to have a threesome with her, but it would be fun to have her watch or something like that.
Re: Went to strip club/feel like crap......(long read)
It's not that we're avoiding responding to your question, it's just that your post is so poorly grammatically written that it's hard to maintain interest in it for more than 3 lines. Yes, I know it's a porn forum, but the rules of grammar weren't just written for geeks and linguists; they were written to allow people to communicate clearly and orderly in writing. It has been proven that people are psychologically turned off by huge chunks of text, such as
To maintain an audience's interest in the reading paragraphs are essential. What paragraphs do is the same thing as when you eat a baked potato. If you try to eat the potato all at once you'll end up choking, but if you cut it up into smaller pieces you can eat the whole thing without any problems.
Another thing that would've helped you keep readers' interest is capitalization. Psychological studies have shown that seeing everything in either all capitals or all lower case makes readers feel like they aren't getting anywhere in the reading. Capitalizing the beginning of sentences gives the reader's eye something to look forward to, sort of like crossing a river. If you try to cross from one side of the river to the other in one leap you'll fall in the water long before you reach the other side, but if you use stepping stones to cross you can make it to the other side without getting wet.
I know that this isn't English 101, but those are just suggestions that would help you keep the interest of anyone reading what you wrote, including members of a porn forum. :hatsoff:
It's not that we're avoiding responding to your question, it's just that your post is so poorly grammatically written that it's hard to maintain interest in it for more than 3 lines. Yes, I know it's a porn forum, but the rules of grammar weren't just written for geeks and linguists; they were written to allow people to communicate clearly and orderly in writing. It has been proven that people are psychologically turned off by huge chunks of text, such as
To maintain an audience's interest in the reading paragraphs are essential. What paragraphs do is the same thing as when you eat a baked potato. If you try to eat the potato all at once you'll end up choking, but if you cut it up into smaller pieces you can eat the whole thing without any problems.
Another thing that would've helped you keep readers' interest is capitalization. Psychological studies have shown that seeing everything in either all capitals or all lower case makes readers feel like they aren't getting anywhere in the reading. Capitalizing the beginning of sentences gives the reader's eye something to look forward to, sort of like crossing a river. If you try to cross from one side of the river to the other in one leap you'll fall in the water long before you reach the other side, but if you use stepping stones to cross you can make it to the other side without getting wet.
I know that this isn't English 101, but those are just suggestions that would help you keep the interest of anyone reading what you wrote, including members of a porn forum. :hatsoff:
^^yup
I's rep you if I could.
I's rep you if I could.
