Hard to say if it is bad (design, shooting, color, etc.) but one thing I like here in this photo is framed as Flora is relatively tight. I think that originally, this photo was with all body and tighting for this occasion (instagram and other). Few photographers are taking close-ups (portrait) of her face. So the choice was easy, especially as the other shared image is already in the thread. This is unfortunate because Mary, when well made up, is of remarkable beauty with freckles on his nose and his upper cheeks.
Mary by Leonard Gren © 2015
NB: Sorry for my little english!