Hey, all, what do you all think of these lyrics of the song? First song written ever... It's called Con 10 U (or Continue) and its for a forming band called Broken Friday, hope you like 
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Song: Continue
Artist: Broken Friday
Album: Hospitalized Cure
Verse 1
The sky, the sky is full of neon lights,
but outside up the street the stupid cupid fights
somewhere in this silent murk
there lurks my awaking tyrant
mop up calls heard through the walls
at the mall down the hall, look up *** because
feelings are growing tall
over the moon, I'm starting to **** you soon
that’s why the sun ain’t shining (keep trying)
young but not a push over, you lost the controller
I know these words would get to you alone home ******
if not I'm on the verge of saying its (over)
but that’s all verbose, no more remorse in the next verse
Chorus
Do you wish to continue?
choose yes to the menu
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour maybe (maybe)
never thought I could be so sour, where’s your will power(crazy)
I know we are lovers (but)
these 60 minutes are tougher (so)
too late, no more dates, uh.. game over
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour maybe (maybe)
always knew your façade looked a little shady lately
you lost your quarter, times up old lover, (uuuuhh) game over
Verse 2
now I’m through, gone, out exit player 2 (you)
now’s its just only you, heres a queue
“this isn’t fair, how dare…”, quit the words I don't care
thought I was gullible though
your vulnerable and it’s so comfortable
the line you've crossed (why?)
you have no more tries, no longer open
this love is broken, most of the time
almost out of order
better find another quarter
to buy another token, stop chocking
(oh oh) tough luck this machine is broken
Chorus
Do you wish to continue?
choose yes to the menu
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby
but it may just last half past the hour maybe
never thought I could be sour, where’s your will power(crazy)
I know we are lovers (but)
these 60 minutes are tougher (so)
too late, no more dates, uh.. game over
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour maybe (maybe)
always knew your façade looked a little shady lately
you lost your quarter, times up old lover, (uuuuhh) game over
Bridge
screw the ten day notice, get a pen you may need to quote this
you've run out of pocket change, now you beside of the change
our love was just a game, but there’s no pins nor long range
never more, hit the door, so long concrete floor
took the blame in this race, quenched the flame
pick up your face, because at the moment your looking lame, you ain’t game (shame)
Chorus
Do you wish to continue?
choose yes to the menu
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour (maybe)
never thought I could be sour, where’s your will power(crazy)
I know we are lovers (but)
these 60 minutes are tougher (so)
too late, no more dates, uh.. game over
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour maybe (maybe)
always knew your façade looked a little shady lately
you lost your quarter, times up old lover, (uuuuhh) game over
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Song: Continue
Artist: Broken Friday
Album: Hospitalized Cure
Verse 1
The sky, the sky is full of neon lights,
but outside up the street the stupid cupid fights
somewhere in this silent murk
there lurks my awaking tyrant
mop up calls heard through the walls
at the mall down the hall, look up *** because
feelings are growing tall
over the moon, I'm starting to **** you soon
that’s why the sun ain’t shining (keep trying)
young but not a push over, you lost the controller
I know these words would get to you alone home ******
if not I'm on the verge of saying its (over)
but that’s all verbose, no more remorse in the next verse
Chorus
Do you wish to continue?
choose yes to the menu
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour maybe (maybe)
never thought I could be so sour, where’s your will power(crazy)
I know we are lovers (but)
these 60 minutes are tougher (so)
too late, no more dates, uh.. game over
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour maybe (maybe)
always knew your façade looked a little shady lately
you lost your quarter, times up old lover, (uuuuhh) game over
Verse 2
now I’m through, gone, out exit player 2 (you)
now’s its just only you, heres a queue
“this isn’t fair, how dare…”, quit the words I don't care
thought I was gullible though
your vulnerable and it’s so comfortable
the line you've crossed (why?)
you have no more tries, no longer open
this love is broken, most of the time
almost out of order
better find another quarter
to buy another token, stop chocking
(oh oh) tough luck this machine is broken
Chorus
Do you wish to continue?
choose yes to the menu
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby
but it may just last half past the hour maybe
never thought I could be sour, where’s your will power(crazy)
I know we are lovers (but)
these 60 minutes are tougher (so)
too late, no more dates, uh.. game over
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour maybe (maybe)
always knew your façade looked a little shady lately
you lost your quarter, times up old lover, (uuuuhh) game over
Bridge
screw the ten day notice, get a pen you may need to quote this
you've run out of pocket change, now you beside of the change
our love was just a game, but there’s no pins nor long range
never more, hit the door, so long concrete floor
took the blame in this race, quenched the flame
pick up your face, because at the moment your looking lame, you ain’t game (shame)
Chorus
Do you wish to continue?
choose yes to the menu
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour (maybe)
never thought I could be sour, where’s your will power(crazy)
I know we are lovers (but)
these 60 minutes are tougher (so)
too late, no more dates, uh.. game over
continue your love, duh lover only a quarter baby (baby)
but it may just last half past the hour maybe (maybe)
always knew your façade looked a little shady lately
you lost your quarter, times up old lover, (uuuuhh) game over
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