Thank you for your comment on my story: "My Son's Girlfriend Seduces Me"
You said, "Very good, I gave you a five on what you wrote. But I do have two quick comments. 1-You should've mentioned the dinner would be poolside earlier because you changing into a bikini for dinner was a bit out of the blue and a tad confusing until nearer the end."
You are exactly right!
- Misty
You said, "Very good, I gave you a five on what you wrote. But I do have two quick comments. 1-You should've mentioned the dinner would be poolside earlier because you changing into a bikini for dinner was a bit out of the blue and a tad confusing until nearer the end."
You are exactly right!
- Misty