Broken Friday
Banned
Hello,
this song is a song for a forming band called Broken Friday. The band is a alt/pop/punk/rap/dance genre based band. So once we are formed and stable, expect different sounds. And to show our genre diversity, here is a song named "Mental Hydroplane". It speaks of how one fights with ones own fears. How your fears can get the best of you, if not controlled. This song is mainly sung with rap, and has a harmonized Linkin Park touch to it (you know, rapper, singer mix). Here it is, hope you enjoy, please feedback is wanted and neeeded.
Note that the chorus, and the bridge is not rapped, it is sang including lines with the asterisk.
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Title: Mental Hydroplane
Artist: Broken Friday
Album: Hospitalized Cure
(when did I lose control?)
Verse 1
on this earthly merry go round
When it comes down
To all I do is frown
Never thought my life was bound
Over the edge
there was no ledge to hold on
All I could do is drown on
felt the mist and dust go round
how could I miss?
it's that fluid in you
knew it that it must be the thing to dew
let go of this ache, a mistake
invisible leaves to rake
wondering am I still awake
how can I reclaim what I couldn't take?
while the ground I stand on continues
to tremble and shake
Hook
I knew it was rain as I felt no pain must of been
*mental hydroplane
no doubt as I chase the unknown, these scars still feel freshly torn
*mental hydroplane
who's the blame? could it be that I'm mentally insane?
*hydroplane
chorus
when you lose it
your soul, ****** it
thrown away threw with it
feel the slip, take a dip
it's no more a game
out of control
feelings all same
you feel so bold
mental hydroplane
(it burns...)
(something inside of me..)
(what could it be?)
Verse 2
feels like propane
every time the name of you hits my membrane
of my ear, no longer a peer
wish you would disappear
got to the end
felt the wind
came back with a thought or ten
subliminally haunting me
after I find out that your part of me
how do I escape
without the take of you with me
cant your eyes see
these words are my misery nursery
quench the flame
no longer insane
only spiritual politics
too numb to feel this
toying with reasonable relics
long night drives on open roads
when it's raining, music low but still banging
though the thought of you is
still drowning the music, in my head ringing
what do I do
it's no more dew when time is do pouring
your lies always begin with "why?"
and it's starting to get boring
only to open my eyes to see that it's snowing
now I have control
of this mental bowl
no more sips
let loose of the edge with my fingertips
released air from my skin pores
all open doors
pain no more
when it rains it pours
but its light across the shore
Hook
I knew it was rain as I felt no pain must of been
*mental hydroplane
no doubt as I chase the unknown, these scars still feel freshly torn
*mental hydroplane
who's the blame? could it be that I'm mentally insane?
*hydroplane
Bridge
water made me loose it
once I knew it
confuse it
as I slid
I understood my own bid
how could a simple fluid in the midst
corrupt all this ****
chorus x2
when you lose it
your soul ****** it
thrown away threw with it
feel the slip, take a dip
it's no more a game
out of control
feelings all same
you feel so bold
mental hydroplane
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this song is a song for a forming band called Broken Friday. The band is a alt/pop/punk/rap/dance genre based band. So once we are formed and stable, expect different sounds. And to show our genre diversity, here is a song named "Mental Hydroplane". It speaks of how one fights with ones own fears. How your fears can get the best of you, if not controlled. This song is mainly sung with rap, and has a harmonized Linkin Park touch to it (you know, rapper, singer mix). Here it is, hope you enjoy, please feedback is wanted and neeeded.
Note that the chorus, and the bridge is not rapped, it is sang including lines with the asterisk.---------------------------------------------------------------------
Title: Mental Hydroplane
Artist: Broken Friday
Album: Hospitalized Cure
(when did I lose control?)
Verse 1
on this earthly merry go round
When it comes down
To all I do is frown
Never thought my life was bound
Over the edge
there was no ledge to hold on
All I could do is drown on
felt the mist and dust go round
how could I miss?
it's that fluid in you
knew it that it must be the thing to dew
let go of this ache, a mistake
invisible leaves to rake
wondering am I still awake
how can I reclaim what I couldn't take?
while the ground I stand on continues
to tremble and shake
Hook
I knew it was rain as I felt no pain must of been
*mental hydroplane
no doubt as I chase the unknown, these scars still feel freshly torn
*mental hydroplane
who's the blame? could it be that I'm mentally insane?
*hydroplane
chorus
when you lose it
your soul, ****** it
thrown away threw with it
feel the slip, take a dip
it's no more a game
out of control
feelings all same
you feel so bold
mental hydroplane
(it burns...)
(something inside of me..)
(what could it be?)
Verse 2
feels like propane
every time the name of you hits my membrane
of my ear, no longer a peer
wish you would disappear
got to the end
felt the wind
came back with a thought or ten
subliminally haunting me
after I find out that your part of me
how do I escape
without the take of you with me
cant your eyes see
these words are my misery nursery
quench the flame
no longer insane
only spiritual politics
too numb to feel this
toying with reasonable relics
long night drives on open roads
when it's raining, music low but still banging
though the thought of you is
still drowning the music, in my head ringing
what do I do
it's no more dew when time is do pouring
your lies always begin with "why?"
and it's starting to get boring
only to open my eyes to see that it's snowing
now I have control
of this mental bowl
no more sips
let loose of the edge with my fingertips
released air from my skin pores
all open doors
pain no more
when it rains it pours
but its light across the shore
Hook
I knew it was rain as I felt no pain must of been
*mental hydroplane
no doubt as I chase the unknown, these scars still feel freshly torn
*mental hydroplane
who's the blame? could it be that I'm mentally insane?
*hydroplane
Bridge
water made me loose it
once I knew it
confuse it
as I slid
I understood my own bid
how could a simple fluid in the midst
corrupt all this ****
chorus x2
when you lose it
your soul ****** it
thrown away threw with it
feel the slip, take a dip
it's no more a game
out of control
feelings all same
you feel so bold
mental hydroplane
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